Friday, 8 July 2016

Feedback


Feedback

Aesthetic
  • Good editing with use of text + images - kept me engaged
  • Well structured but pace too fast
  • Too fast, flashing images - distracting
  • For  level 4, the images should've been put on the side; not middle
Creativity
  • Simple and to the point but still eye catching, though text heavy
  • Some found images but not enough
  • Kept a consistent theme throughout
Technology
  • Used Premiere Pro with good use of effects and image pop-ups to make me want to take in information
  • Sound issues - silent!
  • Should've used a video
Understanding
  • Additional info to class i.e dark web
  • A range of interesting ideas presented + media terminology
  • Lots of detailed info
Production values
  • Good production values using skill set to pull potential but a shame sound didn't work
  • Some flaws - pace too fast, not enough depth etc.
  • For 47 seconds it was very easy to understand and see
WWW
  • Good video overall Callum + Abayomi, aesthetically pleasing and a video that I learnt something new from
  • Wells structured - some good ideas about the topic
  • Lots of good information, balanced points
  • Editing + creativity skills were very high
EBI
  • Make sure all aspects of video are working
  • More ambitious in terms of producton + address current issues
  • Make text larger, slow down info
  • Make the slides more longer

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